pros&cons②

These days, many young people use social media to communicate with their friends.  However, some researchers caution us about the necessity of nurturing media literacy and a lack of interpersonal communication capability.  Let me explain the problems.

I fear the underdevelopment of media literacy, so we must nurture media literacy in children.  Everyone, including me sometimes misunderstands or doesn’t tell that the information is reliable actually.   We can get a lot of information on the Internet.  In other words, the false information spreads across the globe also.  Be careful to surf the Internet and to get new information.  You should check if the information is true or not.

Research found that people over-use the Internet, so we should take the time to communicate with our friends in real life.  If you spend a lot of time to communicate with your friends on the internet and don’t communicate in real life, it may lead relationship problem.  Face-to-face communication is the essential thing to get along with our friends.

 

More and more people use a lot of social media to communicate with each other, but we must be careful about the way how to use one.

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  1. advcomp より:

    We are running out of time?
    Almost done? Print out (double space, please), with the checklist to get a final grade on this piece or thread!

  2. advcomp より:

    > These days, many young people use social media to communicate with their friends.
    use A as a means of xxxing

    > However, some researchers caution us about the necessity of nurturing media literacy and a lack of interpersonal communication capability.
    caution us about the lack of ML and ICC
    > Let me explain the problems.

  3. advcomp より:

    > I fear the underdevelopment of media literacy, so we must nurture media literacy in children.
    I fear the youth has underdevelped media literacy
    I fear the mdedia literacy in the youth is underdevelped
    ???
    > Everyone, including me sometimes misunderstands or doesn’t tell that the information is reliable actually.
    me
    vs.
    myself

    can not tell

    whether A is Y

  4. advcomp より:

    > We can get a lot of information on the Internet.
    > In other words, the false information spreads across the globe also.
    In other words, the false information can spread

    > Be careful to surf the Internet and to get new information.
    We should be careful

    use of infinitive –> not quite right here

    Be careful when surfing the Internet to get new information

  5. advcomp より:

    > You should check if the information is true or not.
    reliable
    vs.
    true

    > Research found that people over-use the Internet, so we should take the time to communicate with our friends in real life.
    Reseach
    vs.
    Some researh
    vs.
    a researc
    vs.
    Researches

    we
    vs.
    they

    take more time
    vs.
    take the time

    use of ‘SO’ –> not quite logical

  6. advcomp より:

    > If you spend a lot of time to communicate with your friends on the internet and don’t communicate in real life, it may lead relationship problem.
    without a face-to-face communication

    it may lead to xxxxxx
    use of lead

    interpersonal problems
    sociality problems
    > Face-to-face communication is the essential thing to get along with our friends.
    meaning is ambegous
    to get along with our friends

    our friends
    vs.
    the friends
    vs.
    friends
    > More and more people use a lot of social media to communicate with each other, but we must be careful about the way how to use one.
    how to use one
    vs.
    one
    vs.
    it

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