My Hometown③

Which do you prefer a rural city, or an urban city?  I live in Kakogawa city, perhaps everyone says Kakogawa is so rural.  Even though Kakogawa city is the countryside, there are some good points which you don’t realize.  Let me explain the food and the resident in Kakogawa.

A cutlet, boilled cabbage, and demi-glace sauce… Do you know this dish?  This is a noted product in my hometown and it is called “Katsumeshi.”  This dish is a kind of a pork cutlet served on the top of a bowl of rice, but this is a little bit different from usual one which everyone imagines.   The sauce of Katsumeshi is a demi-grace sauce.  How surprising it is!  If you have never eaten this dish, I recommend you to try to eat “Katsumeshi.”

My hometown is so safe and everyone is kind also.  Probably it is easy for you to live in the rural city like my hometown.  These days, Kakogawa urbanizes a little and some stores like “Starbucks” or “Tully’s” are built.  Therefore, Kakogagwa is more convenient than you think.

Why don’t you live in my hometown?

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My Hometown③ への12件のフィードバック

  1. advcomp より:

    > Which do you prefer a rural city, or an urban city?
    OK
    > I live in Kakogawa city, perhaps everyone says Kakogawa is so rural.
    city
    City

    comma splices
    ” city , perhaps everyone says Kakogawa is so rural.”

  2. advcomp より:

    > Even though Kakogawa city is the countryside, there are some good points which you don’t realize.
    City

    coutryside
    vs.
    suburbs

  3. advcomp より:

    > Let me explain the food and the resident in Kakogawa.
    explain
    awkward in meaning
    discuss

    resident
    residents
    the resident
    the residents

    which is the best?
    ????

  4. advcomp より:

    > A cutlet, boilled cabbage, and demi-glace sauce…
    > Do you know this dish?
    Regarding the foods, do you know a famous food in my hometown>
    It is xxxx

    > This is a noted product in my hometown and it is called “Katsumeshi.”
    noted
    vs.
    famous
    vs.
    popular

  5. advcomp より:

    > This dish is a kind of a pork cutlet served on the top of a bowl of rice, but this is a little bit different from usual one which everyone imagines.
    on the top of rice in a bowl
    rice
    bowl
    vs.
    bowl
    rice

    either might be good?

    usual one which everyone imagines.
    –> wakarimaseen
    –> use WHAT, instead of
    “usual one which”
    different from what everyone imagines

  6. advcomp より:

    > The sauce of Katsumeshi is a demi-grace sauce.
    OK
    > How surprising it is!
    OK
    > If you have never eaten this dish, I recommend you to try to eat “Katsumeshi.”
    try it
    avoid redundancies

  7. advcomp より:

    > My hometown is so safe and everyone is kind also.
    change of topic, here
    use a connective, to make the flow smoother

    Regarding the safety?
    Regarding the living environment,

  8. advcomp より:

    > Probably it is easy for you to live in the rural city like my hometown.
    easy
    meaning – awkward
    easy
    good
    comfortable
    nice
    best

    which is the best???

  9. advcomp より:

    > These days, Kakogawa urbanizes a little and some stores like “Starbucks” or “Tully’s” are built.

    is getting urbanized a little

    use of ‘and’ — weak logic?

    in fact some popular stores like A and B are being built

  10. advcomp より:

    > Therefore, Kakogagwa is more convenient than you think.
    Therefore –> too stiff

    In short??

    > Why don’t you live in my hometown?
    OK, but not persuasive enough???

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