Why Have I Taken This Class③

Let me explain the reason why I have taken this class.  Before explaining it, I want to introduce myself for you.  I am in my third year at Kwansei Gakuin University, and I specialize the law.  I belong to the nonprofit organization called “Teach For Japan, and I am interested in education in that experience now.  I want to be an English teacher in the future for my profession, so I take a lot of classes for a teacher’s certificate.

What I just like to learn English is the first reason why I took this class.  I have been to Singapore and Malaysia for one week as a school excursion when I was a high school student.  This is the first time to talk with foreign country’s people.  I noticed that English which I studied in junior high school and high school is very useful in foreign country.  I thought that I wanted to learn English more and more then.

This class is a required subject for acquiring a teacher’s license.  That’s the next reason why I have taken this class. If I can’t take this credit by the end of the year, I won’t be able to participate in practice teaching.

I want to develop the knowledge to teach English as a second language also.  I went to Queen’s university in Canada to study English from the last April to the last August, and I felt that academic writing is the most difficult in studying English there.  It is too short to learn how to write the sentence in English, so I want to develop my ability about academic writing.

In short, there are three reasons for me to take this class.

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Why Have I Taken This Class③ への19件のフィードバック

  1. advcomp より:

    > Let me explain the reason why I have taken this class.
    OK

  2. advcomp より:

    > Before explaining it, I want to introduce myself for you.
    I would like to

  3. advcomp より:

    > I am in my third year at Kwansei Gakuin University, and I specialize the law.
    specialize xxx
    in
    specialize — transitive verb??

  4. advcomp より:

    > I belong to the nonprofit organization called “Teach For Japan, and I am interested in education in that experience now.
    to a nonprofit organization
    to the nonprofit organization

    a vs. the

  5. advcomp より:

    > I am interested in education in that experience now.
    in that expeirence –> awkward
    in A in B –> clumsy

  6. advcomp より:

    > I want to be an English teacher in the future for my profession, so I take a lot of classes for a teacher’s certificate.
    so I am taking

  7. advcomp より:

    > What I just like to learn English is the first reason why I took this class.
    awkward
    Simply stated, the very first reason is that I would like to improve my English.

  8. advcomp より:

    > I have been to Singapore and Malaysia for one week as a school excursion when I was a high school student.
    OK

  9. advcomp より:

    > This is the first time to talk with foreign country’s people.
    is
    was

    people in foreign countries
    foreigners outside Japan

  10. advcomp より:

    > I noticed that English which I studied in junior high school and high school is very useful in foreign country.
    in foreign country.
    in a foreign country.
    in foreign countries.

    which is the best??

  11. advcomp より:

    > I thought that I wanted to learn English more and more then.
    Upon coming back to Japan, I have wanted to learn English more and more

  12. advcomp より:

    > This class is a required subject for acquiring a teacher’s license.
    for a T L
    for acquiring a TL

    either is OK, but …. ???

  13. advcomp より:

    > That’s the next reason why I have taken this class.
    This is the second reason

  14. advcomp より:

    > If I can’t take this credit by the end of the year, I won’t be able to participate in practice teaching.
    can’t
    vs.
    cannot
    vs.
    can not

    avoid using of contractions in writing

  15. advcomp より:

    > I want to develop the knowledge to teach English as a second language also.
    to increase
    to develop
    to acquire
    to have

  16. advcomp より:

    > I went to Queen’s university in Canada to study English from the last April to the last August, and I felt that academic writing is the most difficult in studying English there.
    change of topic
    use a connective to make a flow smoother?

  17. advcomp より:

    > It is too short to learn how to write the sentence in English, so I want to develop my ability about academic writing.
    to write in English

    to improve my skills in academic writing

    > In short, there are three reasons for me to take this class.

    there are
    these are
    those are
    those above are

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